Bethan
05/21/2013 5:26am

that is really good how did you do it is was amazing


from Bethan

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maddie
05/21/2013 5:31am

i really like how you set it out,how did u come out with all of that speech

from Maddie in Mr Barlow's class

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Mrs. Vilas
06/01/2013 10:53pm

You needed to have 10 sections. You should have an introduction and a questions for the readers at the end.

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